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The Bamson ship
05-09-2018, 09:24 AM (This post was last modified: 09-27-2018 02:35 PM by vip2kea.)
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The Bamson ship
This is a story about a girl and her roommate save their home ship the Bamson.

This story needs some more characters, if you want to join just fill out this sheet.

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Main role: a friend, an office staff, a villen, a random person.
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Prequel:
Long ago, almost 50 years ago there were a group of people who were an outcast to most people, all the outcasts found each other and formed into 1 big group! They all set sail on a big ship where no one could see them, where no one would be racist or bully them. They grew food on the ship itself and were like a different nation, intel one day the medal started whereing down, haters found out their locations even tho the ship keeped moveing, attacks became a thing and a commen thing. Everything was falling apart. The current people on the ship had no choice but to go to land and repair with better quality.

Most of the characters will be put in chapter 2 and higher because I am almost done with chapter 1!


Chapter 1
Part 1 of chapter 1:
It was a dark and stormy night, Amy clenched onto her poncho as the waves roared and splashed onto the desk. Uh oh Amy said as a wave was going to hit the ship hard, Amy ran to the door and slammed it just a second before the wave hit the deck. Inside the main room it was crowded with people and lots of talking. Amy shoved her way to the rooms and went in her room. Amy’s room was small only 2 beds a desk and another room with a cramped bathroom, she shared it with a girl named Lea. Amy took her pontcho off put it on the desk and layer on her bed.
About 2 hours later Lea rushed in their room door and quietly shut it, panting Lea managed to say “big... waves, big panic on the lower levels, flood,”. “Yeah, the waves are really comeing up, they are wearing down the meadal somehow” Amy said.

Part 2:
It was midnight, all of the sudden the speakers came on and boomed out the words “This is your captain speaking, we have a flood in the basement, please help at your will, and don’t go into the basement if you won’t help, thank you” Amy startled, grabbed a bucket from the desk and headed out to the basement.
“Help, help!” A voice called as Amy got closer to the basement, when Amy got there water was everywhere and people were trying to patch the hole. Amy helped and 4 houres later they were all done. “I got to get back, if Lea sees I am gone she will ask all sorts of questions, bye you all, see some of you at noon!” Everyone else started to head back to there rooms.
When Amy got back she was greeted with a hug from Lea, “OMG where were you?” Lea said. “There was a flood in the basement” Amy said sadly, Lea said Oh...
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05-11-2018, 06:34 PM
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RE: The Bamson ship
Good so far Vip.
Hmm I wonder why Lea was so scared? And that ship really needs to get to dry dock soon for some repairs.

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05-14-2018, 07:03 AM (This post was last modified: 05-15-2018 02:03 PM by vip2kea.)
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RE: The Bamson ship
Chapter 2
Part 1:
Noon time was a big mess in the main room. The captain went on the stage in the lunch part of the main room and tryed his best to address the panic, floods, and the mysterious water contamination. Ether way panic still arose the next couple of days. One morning just like any other morning lately, Amy woke up and went to the main room for breakfast, when she got there it seemd like all the people on the ship where there.
The captain was on the stage, and said “We are going to dock at bay, there has been another flood, this time not as bad.” Everyone gasped it seemd, they have lived on the ship for 15 years.

Part 2:
The horns on the ship blew loudly as the ship came into a dock, the captain told everyone that they were going to stay at the dock for about a week. When Amy stepped on to land for the first time ever in her life, Amy fell. Amy got up and struggled to walk. “The land is so... still, and not rocking,” Amy said curiously. Lea finally came down and went on the land. “Ahh, finally... land again.” Lea said happily. Confused, Amy said “what?”, Lea said sighing “I have been on land before, even tho I was born on this ship like you and most of the people who live on it, i one time fell off the ship and into the water, the crew tryed to get me out but then a wave came and pushed me to a beach somewhere, some days later I was found and went on a lifeboat back to the ship.”. “Oh”, said Amy, you should of told me that. “We didn’t know each other back then” Lea said sadly, before Lea could go on, A girl in blue everything with yellow hair came up to Amy and Lea and said “come on! First time on land and we gotta make it count!” “Who, who are you?” Amy said. “I am Ky, from the left ship area of the same ship you been on!” Amy and Lea had never been on the left side of the ship for many years, the left side became a scary place some years ago. “Well nice to meet you” said Lea scaredly. “Now come on! We have some land to explore!” Said Ky exitadly.
The 3 girls went all around the area, it seemed to be an island.
About 7 hours of exploring everyone went back on the ship, at dinner that night the captain said the workmen would fix everything tomorrow and be here for days, the residents of the ship had to go on land in day when the workmen were here and come back to sleep and dinner at night.


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05-17-2018, 02:06 PM (This post was last modified: 05-18-2018 09:39 AM by vip2kea.)
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RE: The Bamson ship
Chapter 3
Part 1:
“Everyone has to get off the ship in 30 minuts!” The general said the next morning in the speaker. Amy woke up startled. Amy got up and got ready, Lea was already out the ship waiting for Amy as she went down the ramp to the dock. Ky was already off of the wood floor that was the dock. Amy, Lea, and Ky walked for miles on the island, exploring land and doing whatever. It was Noon now and the 3 girls decided to get lunch somewhere. They went to a fast food restaurant, the restaurant looked old and only one or two people in it. The 3 girls went up to the counter, a girl who appeared to be 30 was there and said rudely “What do you want?” “A cheese burger please” Lea said, Ky said “Whatever is the cheapest thing you have”, Amy said “pizza, cheese”.
Some minuts later they were at a table eating when all of the sudden a boy in a dark green coat walked up to the table and said “So... your from that ship that is in our docks ayy?”, His voice sounding like he just ate a horse. “Yes” Amy said “Why do you ask?”. “WHy, Are you HERE???” The boy said madly. “Something about repairs” said Ky. “Do you know why that ship has been sailing for over 40 years? Well do you, well?”. Amy said No.

Part 2:
“Well that was weird”, Lea whisperd into Amy”’s ear as the boy walked away. “Yeag” Amy said, but he did get me wondering, Why has the Bamson sailed for so long without any stops. “I aggree with Amy” said Ky wonderly. The girls finished their lunch and hiked, talking about what they thought the boy ment.
It was 6 when they got back on the ship, they had dinner and went to their rooms.
The next morning when everyone was eating breakfast Simon came up on the stage and said “There has been a break-in about 3 hours ago, we believe it is one of the workmen... if you see anything suspicious please tell anyone who works in the office or Carra”. Carra was the head patrol of the ship, she was the most stern person who lived on the ship Amy knew.
30 minuts later Ky met Amy and Lea, “What should we do?” Ky said. “IDK” said Lea. Amy said with a big smile “Let’s explore caves!!!” Ky said “Ok” and Lea nodded. The girls walked in tell they found a cave, they went inside. Lea said “We forgot supply’s” and Amy said “Why do you think I was so exited about caves?” Amy pulled out of her pocket a pink purse and stuck her hand inside it, she pulled out 3 backpacks and a stone sword. “H-How?.. did you do that?” Lea said, Ky’s mouth dropped down. “You seriously never known the secret of big things in little? Wow, ok.” Amy gave Lea and Ky each a backpack and the 3 girls headed deaper into the cave.
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05-17-2018, 06:35 PM
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RE: The Bamson ship
A mystery... sounds interesting.

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05-22-2018, 07:02 AM (This post was last modified: 05-24-2018 07:08 AM by vip2kea.)
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RE: The Bamson ship
Sorry for the delay.

Chapter 3
Part 1:
“I’m scared” Lea said as the 3 girls went deaper into the cave. “We never got to do this before, but I know this is 70% safe to do” Amy said. “WWHHAAAATT?!?!??” Lea said “ONLY 70%” screamed Lea. All of the sudden, rocks started falling from the celling “RUN” said Amy. The girls ran deaper and deaper into the cave, the entrance was now caved in by the falling rocks. The girls finally got to a large cavern, “We should be safe in here” said Ky “right?”



Part 2:
Hours past, “It’s getting late.” Said Ky, “we have been waiting down here for hours... it is almost time to go back to the ship.” “Why did you bring us down here Amy?” Said Lea sounding slightly mad. Amy said “I wanted to do something we could not do on the ship.” All of the sudden there was a flash of light and the celling started to rumbel, “no where to go! We are trapped!!!” Said Ky frightened. “Jump on the rocks as they are falling, we might be able to get on the surface!” Amy said confidently.
“What, no.... We will not make it!”
But, Ky followd Amy, jumping on the rocks. Scared, Lea followed.
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05-29-2018, 09:31 AM (This post was last modified: 05-29-2018 09:32 AM by vip2kea.)
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RE: The Bamson ship
Sorry for the delay!

Chapter 4
Part 1:
The rocks thumbled and tumbled as Amy, Lea. And Ky jumped on the rocks while they were falling.
Load thunder roard above as Light started to peek throug. It was only 5 minuts of jumping on rocks before Amy climbed her way up a big bolder. When Amy reached the top, she put her and in her backpack, pulled out a long peach rope and threw one end down, Ky climbed it and got up in just 30 seconds, Lea struggled and after 2 minuts Amy tagged on the rope, bringing it up it also brought up a dizzy Lea. “Owe” said Lea, you are sure in a hurry! “Yes I am” Said Amy, we only got an hour or 2 intill we have to get back to the ship. “I see light” said Ky. Amy turned to where Ky was gazing off to, sunlight struck threw the opening. The 3 girls walked twords the light, when they got there, they saw a beach and a little dock with a hut that seemed more like a tent, a man in a red t-shirt came over to the opening where the girls were and said “I know you, you folks are from the Bamson”, “yeah,” Said Ky. “What are you doing over here then? This is the other side of the island, hurry now.” “Wow... the other side, ok.. thanks, bye!” Said Amy hurriedly. The man waved as the girls ran back to the ship, sweet starting to fourm as the waves cooled them of as they ran.
When they got there, the last of the people were getting back on, the girls rushed into the crowed and they went up the ramp, and to the main room for dinner.
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06-04-2018, 07:02 AM
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RE: The Bamson ship
Delay again >.>

Part 2:
Amy ate her food and walked to her room, Lea stayed behind to talk to Joe, a random boy she bumped into just before dinner. Ky allready went to her room. When Amy got to her room she flung the door open and flopped on her bed. The door slowly closed but not all the way. Some hours later Amy here voices, 2 people were talking. Amy quickly sat up and lissoned. “Well what are we going to do?” Said one voice, the other said “I don’t know, we better finish up rebuilding this weird ship so they can get out of here! “Agreed” Said the voice that said I don’t know.

When the 2 people finished going past a good 10 doors down, Amy quickly ran out her door and to the frount office, Simon was not there, instead a girl with bright pink hair with rainbow streaks “What di you need?” Said the girl tiredly, “My name is Flora, I am the new frount desk person.”
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06-04-2018, 08:00 PM
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RE: The Bamson ship
Story is getting very interesting Vip. Those girls sure can get into some trouble. Good thing they got out of the cave, but the other side of the island... wow.
I wonder what those 2 people were talking about rebuilding the ship... and who is the new front desk girl?

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06-05-2018, 07:08 AM (This post was last modified: 06-06-2018 06:51 AM by vip2kea.)
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RE: The Bamson ship
Chapter 4:
Part 1:
“Ahh yes, I would like to report some suspicious behavior” said Amy to smoothly. Flora frowned and sighed “Who is it?”, “I don’t know, I herd 2 people walking past my room probably an hour or so ago.”
Flora asked some more questions, most Amy did not understand why they needed to be awncerd. When Flora was done asking questions she pushed a big blue button on the desk and suddenly someone’s voice came out of it. “What happened now?” Said the voice. Flora handed a peice of paper to Amy as she explained to the voice from the button, then it said “Officer Rodger will be with you in a minute, please wait in your room and wait the officer will come to you. Said Flora.

Amy said as she started walking out the office doors “What happens to Simon?”, Flora shrugs and said “I do not know, don’t ask me... as the officer!”

Amy went back to her room and sat on her bed, waiting, waiting... seconds turned into minutes, minute turned into hours, intill s big man knocked on the door, Amy went to the door and opened it, the man was big and wore blue officer coat on, He was holding a notebook in one hand and a black pen in the other.
“Hello Amy, I herd you saw or herd something suspicious, I am sorry I am late, lots of people have been reported problems both in the ship and suspicions.” Amy said “yes”, “So, I was in my room and I herd 2 people going past my room talking” Amy said. “What did they say?” Said the officer. “Something about rebuilding quickly”, the officer nodded and said “Why would people rebuild at night? Captain Max set a strict policy that workers shall not build anything at night, they must be hideing something”. Amy confused, asked the officer “How did you come up with an awnser so fast?” “The people who are in this hallway a couple hours ago herd what you herd, I have got enough evidence, Melus, the person who is in the room next to you herd what you herd, She said one of the voices sounded like Thomas. Amy did not know Thomas very well, he was one of the workmen Amy saw working on the ship one day. After 30 minuts of talking about what happened, the officer left the room and down the hall twords Armondos and his roommate Henry’s room.
Amy said “Uh Oh” to herself.

(06-04-2018 08:00 PM)Tisjstme Wrote:  Story is getting very interesting Vip. Those girls sure can get into some trouble. Good thing they got out of the cave, but the other side of the island... wow.
I wonder what those 2 people were talking about rebuilding the ship... and who is the new front desk girl?

Littery at the bottom of the page chapter 4 part 2.
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06-05-2018, 01:56 PM
Post: #11
RE: The Bamson ship
YAY! You got me in! Big GrinD
Thanks!

I just noticed this now by the way Sad

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06-06-2018, 07:04 AM
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RE: The Bamson ship
Part 2:
“Ahhh! WHAAT????” Screamed a voice, it sounded like Armondos screaming in surprise. Amy knew Armondos did not like Officer comeing to his door, they scared him and everyone knew it. Amy herd Henry go up to the door and he talked to the officer, Armondos was still screaming, more then half the hallway woke up, Melus yelled “WHAT HAPPENED THIS TIME?” Amy yelled “Officer Richard came”
“Aww... and it’s 2 in the morning! Said a naber across the hallway. 2 hours later the screaming stopped, and everyone was tired this morning, captain Max made an announcement when the screaming stopped “The workers will not be here today”. Everyone in that hallway was happy, sleeping finally came!
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06-11-2018, 07:09 AM (This post was last modified: 06-11-2018 01:51 PM by vip2kea.)
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RE: The Bamson ship
Chapter 5:
Part 1:
“Ring” a bell rang, Amy woke up tired, it was 10 am, Amy didn’t know what to expect, she thought the workers were not coming today. Foot steps came closer and people began talking, Amy got dressed and walked into the hallway. The lights were all different and there were floating people, Amy tryed to pinch herself but couldn’t,. Amy thought she was dreaming till out of nowhere a hammer hit her, aU could feel it, the pain soon seized then Amy started seeing floaters, they were all different colors like the food in the lunch room.
Then, everything became black, Amy could feel smooth metal under her. And something burring her left arm.


Part 2:
The burning became more intense, voices started coming out of nowhere “Amy, are you ok? WAKE UP!”. Amy felt something cool on her leg, and felt like she was being pulled somewhere. Amy, as confused as ever kicked and flung her limbs in random places. Amy then herd a voice that sounded like Nurce Annie saying “Lea, I think your friend is in a Khoma or is sick, we don’t know.” Amy then felt something soft, soft like a bed, but it didn’t feel like her bed. The moving stopped all of the sudden, Amy now deep in thought, what’s going on, why did Nurse Annie say Khoma, and did she mean Koma or Khoma? Amy just didn’t know.

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06-14-2018, 07:03 AM (This post was last modified: 06-14-2018 07:04 AM by vip2kea.)
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RE: The Bamson ship
Chapter 6:
Part 1:
A sudden bang hit the ship and it rocked roughly for a couple hours. Amy woke up slowly her vison didn’t seem as clear as it used to be and Amy’s rib was sore. Amy sat up and looked around, there was nothing much in the room, just a while room with some tables, one of the tables had some sort of blue cloth on it. Amy knew this must of been one of the medical rooms. About 3 minuts later Nurse Annie came in with something in her hands, when she looked at Amy she almost dropped it. “Oh Amy, your up!” Said Nurse Annie happily, Lea thought you would be down for atleast 2 more days. “W-What happened?” Said Amy. The ship got attacked again almost a week ago, your head bumped into a wall or something... that’s what Lea told me atleast. “Where is Lea anyways?” Said Amy. “Sleeping, it is 11pm Honey, you will be sleeping here tonight tho.”

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06-15-2018, 12:28 PM (This post was last modified: 06-15-2018 12:40 PM by vip2kea.)
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RE: The Bamson ship
Part 2:
Amy couldn’t sleep that night, Annie fell asleep in a chair near one of the tables. A machete was on and made a soft rumbleing outside the room, other then that it was silent. Amy fell asleep around 4am and woke up at 11. Amy woke up by something getting shot in her left arm. Amy sat up and saw Annie up, she was holding something Amy couldn’t make out.
“Don’t worry” Said Annie. Just under 2 seconds later a girl in a white lab coat came in, she was holding some sort of beaker and a reddish-brown clipboard. The girl said “Hello, I am Doctor Foxm, I am from the island you are docked at. Nurse Annie Bel here saw the most strangest simptons yesterday to me.” “I don’t think she knows,” Said Annie sadly.
Dr. foxm thumbled into her pockets and pulled out a small face mirror.
Dr. Foxm pointed it to Amy.

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